The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
A lovely story poem - very meaningful and poignant. Wonderful message, too.
This tells just how amazing God's love reaches beyond where we take ourselves. God cannot seem to be able to help Himself but to love us, which is an awesome security!
A poem from the heart--loved it--a warm and honest testimony.
02/17/08
Wow! This is a wonderful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the reading experience:)
Laury
Poignant, well written, but loses rythym and rhyme here and there. Perhaps better titled 'Nothing I Can Do'. God bless you.
Your poem is meaningful and hopeful. The phrase 'by golly' didn't seem to fit the voice of the rest of the poem in my opinion. I like the way you hinted at a lover taking the daughter away.
02/19/08
What a beautiful poem of God's grace. I love how He pursues us. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of encouragement for all who hurt.