The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere here - it felt creepy and frightening from the first word to the last (and that last sentence was PERFECT).
02/11/08
Atmospheric, preternaturally eerie, worthy of Milton. As the poet first expressed it, “Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heav’n”
02/11/08
Stunning writing--some of the best here!

I'm lost as to how this applies to this week's topic, though.

Love your title, and your mastery of mood.
Amazing, riveting entry. Your setting of mood is masterful.
02/12/08
Chilling descriptions of Satan-in the beginning paragraphs, especially. It's amazing how he won't give up the plan-and you captured his destructive hatred perfectly.