The Official Writing Challenge
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Some great detail here - I have to admit, though, that I wish you hadn't titled it as you did - kinda gave away the end, you know? I also caught a few punctuation and grammar issues - nothing major, though. Keep writing.
I agree about the title- sort of a spoiler. But the details were excellent. I felt like I was there in the car with the main character. There's a great lesson in it as well. We should be happy with the life we're given and let God take care of the details. Unique approach to the topic. :)
Good story and probably has a lot of truth to it. A few minor typo's, but overall kept me reading.
Very good story. I wasn't ready for it to be a dream, in spite of the title. Maybe I'm a little slow today! Great writing!