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01/17/08
Charming and delightful. Very well-written piece.
Oh I do so like this one. The dialouge is so fresh! I enjoyed the setting of Lords and Ladies on a dinner at a fancy house, where important matters are surely discussed and of course, there is the mysterious fellow at the dinner table! Delightful characters-and excellent story! ^_^
01/19/08
This is an intriguing piece. I’m not entirely sure what’s going on. I get the wink, but where was the promise? The one made to the King, or Alayna’s fealty to her husband, or the offer inferred from the wink of a later relationship?
I’ve had this happen to me. I write something that makes perfect sense to me but no one else gets it. That’s why FaithWriters is great for exposing our writing to public scrutiny. I do like your piece; I just have some unanswered questions.
01/20/08
Delightful read, I love the illustration of being a good stewart of what the king bestowed on him. well written!!
I really enjoyed this engaging tale of the curious Alayna and her kind, wise, yet misunderstood host.