The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what an enjoyable read. Interesting dialogue that was easy to follow, even without the tags at the end of each quote.
Whoa! I could sure feel for Jared. That's quite a load to carry and to keep up with. I'm glad at least, he'll have a chance to try and follow his true dreams. I thought the turnaround for the Dad was too quick, but you fixed that with having him trying to get Jared back into the same school. Good job with this one. ^_^
Unique twist on the topic, but I like it. A bad decision turns into a blessing...good job! I wish you'd have left out all the "man's" though. It got in the way of the story.