The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Cool--I just read another entry with a similar "take", but both entries very different--what a testament to the unending creativity of FaithWriters! This is awesome. I was distracted at first by the all-caps, but now I think I like them; they irritate the reader just a bit, and that's appropriate for where they are used.
WOW! This is absolutely amazing! You take us on several different view points on quite a reading rollercoaster! I liked the idea of switching back and forth and how the 'choice' that was made was already 'theirs'. This was great, your opening descriptions were especially good! ^_^