The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
There's no mistaking the suspense and the excellent writing here--rather breathless, in fact--but I'm left scratching my head. Huh????
01/17/08
Excellent descriptions and tension here - but not enough "background" to let the average uninformed reader understand what is going on and why. I enjoyed it, however, because I have "the background."
01/23/08
Oh goody-the next installment. I hope this means there will be more next week. Amazing action and descriptions, of course. You can't stop this story now, you know.