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I love the repeating phrase of forgive-just forgive. The part with the puppy was great, I liked how it tied in with the 'unfinished' rift between her father and her. The last line was great. ^_^
This is so sad and you have captured the MC's feelings. A great reminder of forgiveness.
Lovely story of forgiveness. It's hard to think of forgiving those who hurt us, but the freedom is so worth the effort.
Beautiful and convicting.
This sentence is a great picture:
Realization and regret joined hands for Ann.
Poignant - and I love the surprising analogy at the end. Much truth here.
I like the illustration of tying the knot of love. Well done!