The Official Writing Challenge
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Great piece! perfect reminder.
Oooh, don't I know the feeling of the dust bunnies piling up. Ouch for the speeding ticket. I'm glad she was able to get to work on it anyway though. Great work with this piece. ^_^
Good title for this realistic piece. You had some really good descriptions in here as well. A double space between paragraphs would make it easier to read. I loved your honesty portrayed here. I better go to my stack of paperwork now!
Perfect title for this piece, and definitely something I can (I'm ashamed to admit!) relate too.

I would have liked a stronger ending - that last line sizzled a bit, in my opinion. The rest of the piece was quite strong, though. Keep writing!