The Official Writing Challenge
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Hmmm...that could work :>
I would have gone with your first idea of just asking him nicely if he would turn down his stereo. However, far be it for me to downplay your unorthodox strategy of accomplishing your goal - as it worked beautifully! Entertaining and enjoyable read.
I could just feel those gears turning in that head of your MC's. A fun read. I was sure something "bad" was going to happen to the MC (the ladder would fall on top of him or something).Keep writing!