The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, this is cool! I love the repetition!
This is stupendous! I suspect I know who wrote this, and it tickles me no end. Deceptively simple, and simply deep...
Unique, fun and I loved the ending!
Very good. I was actually singing this instead of reading:)
I thoroughly enjoyed how unique this one was.
Lovely lyrics. Did you write them with a tune in mind? I loved the surprise ending.
Love this beautifully simple, profound little verse. Exactly right.
Indeed this is uniquely creative. I loved the rhythm and the message.
best I've come across this week. it actually stopped me in my mental tracks and replaced "critique this one" with "experience this one."
oooooh! You are being...ahem..creative? Lolz. I liked this, the title had my attention and the repitition was well done. I think it made it come out as a song in my head as I read it through. The last line though-was the crowning moment. Loved it!
This had such wonderful rythm I found myself singing it in my mind as I read. You are very talented and creative.