The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/07
This is a great piece of writing. You probably were in a hurry to send this in and missed one or two things, but the reader knew what you wanted to say. He stands alone but with Christ at his side because you showed how the listeners were carried along with his preaching and appealed to a cross-section, just as he could have come from a cross-section of people. I think you did a wonderful job.
11/24/07
Nice job relating this to a train. Thank you for sharing.
Laury
11/27/07
Loved this piece too. Could relate to how fear first grips us and then as the Holy Spirit takes over, it does seem like a train gaining momentum, as our flesh takes a back seat to His Spirit. Good writing and relateable.