The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/07
I really like the story progression of this poem. The pain you felt really comes across in your writing. What a friend you found!! I had to smile at the the line about the mother's pie making him drool. :) Your next to the last stanza contains some profound wisdom. You are blessed!
11/17/07
What a lovely story - you absolutely touched my heart with this. I'm assuming it's true. I stumbled in a few places on the meter - but I'm no poetry expert. This definitely blessed me.
11/18/07
This is so tender. You did well to tell it through poetry. I could see the courage and confidence growing as he was given love.
11/22/07
This is a very good story in the form of a poem. I can't imagine making a story rhyme. Great job! Thank you so much for sharing!
Laury