The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
Gee... I don't see anything wrong with the strawberry statement! rofl!

Kidding! Nicely written, well presented! Thanks!
05/23/05
Send some of those chocolate strawberries my way. Nice article.
05/24/05
Loved the Hawk Moth analogy it drew me in and kept me reading! Waiting for hubby to get a straberries and chocolate face mask! Engaging story. You could have saved yourself some words by jmping straight into the story (ie cut today I... go straight to the Hawk Moth) and do a careful final edit for typos like its' when you mean its.
Fun story. Showing that love everyday is far more important than performing on a special occasion. I enjoyed reading about his Valentine's blunder. Glad he has repented! :) I think Val had some good suggestions for clean up, but on the whole, this is a great read.
LOVE the conclusion. This was my favorite line: "As for my husband, he learned that love your wife as Christ loves the church sometimes means paying double the price for a bouquet of flowers."
05/29/05
Touche'! Really enjoyed the read!