The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/07
This was a wonderful story and wonderful writing.
11/13/07
I like your title and ending sentence. You did a good job writing this!
11/13/07
Great job with the authentic setting, dialogue, and characterization.
11/14/07
Love these characters, and the descriptions are first rate! I really enjoyed the dialogue, too. But my favorite point is the one you make about being happy even if ONLY one bent their knee in repentance. Some modern preachers could take a lesson from that kind of humble and grace-loving attitude!
Excellent writing!!
11/17/07
Wow! Your characters are unique! Loved the banter, the manner and the story.

God bless!