The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the military flavor of this, and the analogies you've drawn. My tiniest suggestion would be to get to the main point--baptism and obedience--a tad sooner. We're past halfway before we know where the military analogy is leading us.

Really well-written, a great point, and a cool title!
Great analogy.
Nice title! This sure delivered and especially in following.
Just think of how much grief we would avoid as believers if we just did what God tells us instead of fighting Him or questioning Him. Good job.