The Official Writing Challenge
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Very visual - you had me on the edge of my seat. The emotion was so raw, so real. Good stuff.
The Lord always makes a way. Great description.
A nice vehicle to deliver your message. Sad, but full of God's grace to the end. God bless.
Wow! Felt like I was watching a movie. Loved how you took us through the timeline of his life. What a treasure. God has given you a huge gift. May you continue to use it for His kingdom.
Powerful writing and strong emotions woven into a riveting story.
This is a wonderful story. I love the summary of his life through the voices of his past.
Oh my, my, my.....I am really blown away by the emotions that stirred as a result of reading this. VERY effective and beautiful piece.
This is great. Very creative. I could picture the entire thing. Superb.
This could almost be the repentant thief pardoned by a word from Jesus. When its the King of heaven and earth, all we need is just one word. Your story is powerful and the wonderful thing about it is that it's true. With God all things are possible.
Author's Note: All these years later I see "you're" where "your" should have been. (Wonder if anyone else reads old entries with fresh editing eyes and finds places that slipped through the process of proofing?)