The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/07
Love love LOVE the voice of this. You are a masterful storyteller - I was right there with him. Wonderful.
Brilliant storytelling, with a very important message. Loved every bit of it.
10/20/07
I love the perspective you used for this topic. Good job!
10/21/07
Oh my! WOW--I could watch this story as it was being told. Very good descriptions and flow.
10/23/07
Very effective, one of my favorites this week. The ending was perfect.
The writing here is very compelling. I was in the story all the way.