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10/19/07
A heart-warming story and a different slant on fellowship. I like the characters you created in this entry.
Well written and heart-warming. I loved the ending when they found the message on the stone, and the mother/son relationship explored. I felt some of the sentences were a little long e.g. 'The ones Ryan had meant to give her for Christmas that shed found two weeks after the funeral under the top tray of his tool box.' It may just be me though!

Enjoyed this piece.
10/20/07
Wonderful characterization and a tender story. Love how you finished it.
Your story is charming and poignant and rounds out so nicely.