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There are no words adequate to really do this piece justice. You have suffered so much, but equally you have been utterly blessed with wonderful Christian friends. In standing with you in your darkest hours they have expressed the essence of Jesus love and sacrifice.
This reads as if it is true - I am praying regardless. You tell this story with an immediacy and poignance that touched me, and engaged me from beginning to end. Wow.
This piece really touched my heart. Your ending gave me much to think about, and I whole-heartedly agree.
This is extremely well written... the content is hard to comment on because it is so emotional, but you told it so very very well. You managed to convey the whole experience to the reader in just 750 words - excellent!