The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I LOVE this. Little stories like this always bless me, and you have done an amazing job of setting the scene and sharing your message. Your last line is absolutely perfect.
Very interesting story and love its message. The descriptions are very vivid. Great job!
This was a well written story that really held my interest. Great job writing!
What a unique, yet extremely relevant portrayal of Christian fellowship. Well done.
Great story. Great lesson.
Excellent. This packs a powerful punch, yet it reads simply enough that most can understand it. Love the fairy tale feel of this. Brilliant work.
Nicely done. You achieved a lot in this short piece that spoke to our souls and encouraged our hearts. Wonderful sense of place. Congratulations!
Congratulations on your highly commended. This is a really good story, and very well written. Nice job with the topic.
I love descriptive writing and you have beautifully chosen words to paint a very pretty picture!