The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job with rhyme and meter in this pithy little poem!
Oh how true! We can easily become so tied to our 'church' habits that we lose sight of the universal church. Thank you for this poem.
Yes, we're probably all in for a few surprises.
I agree, we are all in for a few surprises when that day comes. I really enjoyed the way you presented this in rhyme and meter.
Clever way to call attention to our denominational walls. I like the style, and the rhythm of your poem. I think we'll find many surprised people in Heaven!
Liked it! Nice job and good rhythm.