The Official Writing Challenge
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There are lots of great poetic images here, particularly in stanzas 4 and 9.

You've got the poetic chops, that's for sure--I'd love to see more use of the tools available in the poet's toolbox. I thought it fizzled a bit at the end, when you really wanted the punch.

Love the thematic trip through the Bible, and your wonderful word choices.
This is absolutely lovely. Great way of walking us through the Bible.

Fantastic job.
This brief Fuel of Fear encompassed many Biblical lessons for us all...and so easily understood. I enjoyed the read and learned from it. Nicely written.
The last stanza is the perfect testimony for every Christian. I enjoyed your poetic journey through the Bible.