The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/07
I think we've all "stumbled along in everyday tasks." This is well done and speaks volumes in few words. Thanks for sharing.
Your poem shows well the truth of your title. I like the change in your poem from sadness to joy because of Jesus.
08/08/07
Your poem makes me think of the song, "Jesus Paid it All." There's beauty and truth in your poem.