The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
Very nice twist! Great job!
You write very well. I'd love to read one of your novels!
05/13/05
You paint an engaging picture of a well liked man who has his priorities right!
05/16/05
Dub,
Great dialogue, nice twist.

Well done!
09/07/05
Scroggins is an uncaring, blinded by his own success, businessman. He has numerous opportunities to express Christmas wishes but passes on each. He cares about nobody but himself and his own convenience. Mother is no more than a problem in his life, she knows it, he knows it. However, we should realize that he is only a reflection of who she once was.