The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
wow... this is wonderful!
I could feel the heart of this man and sympathize with the child he had been.
I could even smell the musty attic..and see the faded old dress form so clearly.
Excellent! Kate~
Wonderful, vivid descriptions. You could feel the young boys heartache. Excellent lesson in this story.
07/22/07
This is a touching, bittersweet story. The relationship between the father and son was well described. I enjoyed this very much!
07/23/07
Beautiful. A much needed message and so good to see that the lesson was learned before another generation was hurt.