The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Oh, I could smell the rain as it soaked the fields! Great job. Loved the ending... especially the line "I guess the Lord said we could!"
Kate~
07/21/07
I apprepciate your story telling ability. The descriptions are original and highly effective.

It carried me, and involved me completely. A smoothly, confidently written account, which maintains a confident standard of writing and a certain tension to a most satisfactory ending.

Well done.
07/23/07
Engaging story. I could feel it and see it and that's all good stuff.
Excellent job with descriptions and pulling your read into the story...loved the happy ending. Great job storytelling.
...your reader into the story.
07/25/07
This is an amazingly visual piece - your descriptions were excellent. Loved this.