The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
A heartfelt modern Psalm, easy to read.

Try some fresh imagery and play around with unexpected word combinations to give your poetry more sparkle.

Thanks for sharing your confidence!
07/13/07
I especially like your opening lines. Your poem is easy to read and interesting, too. I agree with Jan; it does remind me of a Psalm. :)
07/15/07
I think every Christian has experienced this: "I work so hard, just to fail"

Then you didn't leave us in that forlorn state: "But He’s right there to pick me up."

You used an interesting format. I like it. Thanks!
07/17/07
Especially loved the first stanza. Just lovely.
This is a great, sweet poem. Thanks.