The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, you have shudderingly vivid descriptions of Lucifer. Very good writing with a unique perspective!!
Good thing we already know the end of the story! Very descriptive writing. Suspenseful, too, even though we know what happens next!
Very vivid - gave me goosebumps.
Excellent approach to the topic! Creative and compelling--very well-written.
Oh, this is very well written. Satan is a nasty little creature and you showed that very well. I am glad we know the end, as well.
I liked your approach to the topic, and your entry was very well written. Your imagery is very vivid. Great Job!
Colorful, descriptive writing that added a great flavor to your writing. And, looking at your title, and knowing how the story ultimately ends, this reader asks is there a false confidence in "Perfect Planning."? Nice job.
This is so vivid it gave me the shivers!! wow.
Whoa!! GREAT job, Ruth! Lucifer almost jumped off the page, you made him seem so real. That taloned finger stroking the apple... shiver

A creative take on the topic and a unique MC. One of my faves so far. Your talent shines with this entry. :)