The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
Definitely a devotional teens will be able to relate to. Great examples (I was skinny too, by the way - still am actually LOL). This ministered to me too - and I haven't been a teen for, oh, um - a while! ;)
06/15/07
This article has nice flow from beginning to end. There's just enough insecurity for teens learning to find their place in life to identify with, but also a good message about what really matters--and what makes a good friend.
"A sweet spirit, a happy heart, and a gift for encouraging others." Wow, true inner beauty and something for every teen (and adult) to strive for!
Teens need devotionals that address self-esteem and confidence. In fact ... we all do! Very nice writing.
06/19/07
Great ending!, loved how you added "husband" in there!