The Official Writing Challenge
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Donkey Odee! Don Quixote! I love it! My dad used to have a petting zoo, and he had a donkey named Donkey Hodey, so I picked up on this right away. I love children's stories that toss a little something to the adults reading them.
Fun - and good lesson for kids at their level. Nice.
Cute story. I like how you portrayed the snake, and every child would applaud the ending, for sure!
Children love animal stories and hero stories. You combines those features excellently. The imagery is great.
sorry--"combined" The challenge was to write for a child--not like one!
This was a delightful story, replete with Satan, angels and Donkey Odee who, in his own strength, is simply laughable. This was a good story to show us what we can do, standing up for what is right in our own pastures, with God at our side. Very well done and deserving of recognition!