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A story that kept my attention... I could really relate to the emotional journey of the storyteller. Great descriptions!
Very interesting and well written story...excellent lesson too.
Great message in this story! My favorite line was "We dont always know what lies ahead because if we did - we probably wouldnt try anything. How true! Good job! :)
Very good. Making a harrowing experience into a good POV.
Amazing storytelling! You held my attention throughout with the vivid descriptions and harrowing details. Very well written!
This kept me on the edge of my seat for a bit. I felt like I was there.Great descritions and comparisons. I could relate to this as I have sometimes complained myself in life. I 've often wondered, "What are we doing in a situation like this?", when all the time God was there designing the whole episode and guiding us through the rivers of His planned adventure. I really like your writing style. Wow.God bless your gifts hon.Janice
Wow! This gave me chills! I loved it! The whole story and how it all tied together for a life lesson and at the same time kept me on the edge of my seat.

I really hope this does well - it should.
Great piece of writing. I really liked the beginning in italics, seemed to set up anticipation for the story. Good job!