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Interesting alternate future and good storyline.
I was very intrigued, from beginning to end. This flowed very well, and held my interest - I would LOVE to know the rest of the story!
I'd like to know what happened to the team...what did they find?'ll have to write a sequel!
This is a very interesting adventure. I had one question about the date--1983?
You masterfully gave us the whole "back" story line without narrating. Very intriguing, almost Asimov-like. Loved it.
I really enjoyed this. Even though I kind of knew how it would end, you still had me in suspense when she was taking off all her gear. Great story telling.

As far as the year goes, there was a nuclear attack that was thwarted in 1983, but I don't remember the details.