The Official Writing Challenge
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Great title and poem. It was kind of hard to read without breaks yet I know when I'm thinking thoughts upon thoughts with the Lord at night, my thoughts keep going on without a break, so I took it symbolically! Nicely done.
I can so relate to this since I have a sleep disorder. Good work.
Okay, you, Rhonda, and me, the Insomniac Society. We should IM each other at 3 a.m.

Seriously, your ramblings are real, authentic, and touching.
I think the choppy rhythm make the poem say what sleeplessness persons feel. A nice treatment.
I like your form -- it definitely delivered your message in style.
The entire concept of your poem is perhaps too much to grasp as a whole, but in little bites it is profoundly moving. This has to be a "God thing" He gave you to put on paper. I thank you for being His available messenger.
[to uncover some of the riches behind the poem, readers will want to check the Theology Discussions forum on the message boards, topic "A Challenge Entry about Philosophy and Theology."]