The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/07
Great poem. Testimony to how we should reach out to others.
Wow, powerful poem. May God help us to remember how valuable every person that He created is...
What a strong poem on what feeling rejected does to a child.
Oooooo....makes me think about what the flip side means....being visible in God's eyes and the eyes of humans who have His vision.

Thought provoking...good job!!

I really liked the third stanza. Good job.
You captured the pain well of someone who wants to feel validated. This is touching and well written.
This is so sad and represents so many. I loved the line "Hiding from a world that doesn't want her."
Good job!
05/30/07
Touching message...one to be taken to heart!
05/30/07
Very powerful and heartbreaking. Very well-written!
05/30/07
Very powerful and heartbreaking. Very well-written!
05/30/07
Very tragic, but an important message.