The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! All I can say is that I'm blown away. This is absolutely amazing. And kind of heartbreaking. It's simple and very powerful. Excellent, excellent, beautiful writing! ^_^
Very good read. What a way to show our submitting to God's will.
Ahhh, this is soooo good! I love the Haiku and how interesting the techinique is. This ia haunting verse and the mood and voice are superb!
Lovely use of haiku; it fits beautifully with this poem.
One thought: do you think you might be able to incorporate more imagery into this poem some how?
Great job; keep up the good work!
So simple, and yet so effective.
Lovely - I definitely like the structure and the wonderful message.
Good job. Not sure I could do the structure. I'm in awe.
Interesting poem using the Haiku structure, and you duely note that it is English in its form, therefore releasing the mandate for nature. Overall nicely presented.
Not a fan of Haiku :-(

Loved reading this! :-)
A lot of thought went into this piece and it shows with the truth shining through - great job!
I really liked this. God bless.
Oh, I really like this! I have always enjoyed Haiku and wrote some many years ago, so I was very intrigued with your poem! The message here is simply awesome, and your style is lovely! I went back to read it again and pick my favorite stanza, but I had too many favorites! :D Great writing!
Kudos on taking a Haiku past the 150 word
In all seriousness this was great as I do enjoy, and appreciate well-crafted Haiku as this.
***Congrats! Julie!*** ^_^
Congratulations - a lovely piece and well-deserved win!
CONGRATULATIONS on your "Highly Commended"! :) This is a wonderful, touching poem!
Congratulations. This is very lovely, and so enjoyable to read. Great job.
Beautifully done! Congratulations! Consider yourself successfully stretched! Cheri