The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great start, and you kept the great pace all the way through. Strong writing, gripping message. Great work!
The last half is superb! In the first half, you spend quite a few words filling us in, giving background information. In such a small word limit, try for ways of telling just a small story, so that the background can be inferred. Then you can spend more time on character development, and write a tighter, more fast-paced story. Your writing skills are top notch, and the story is gripping.
Well written. Good story.
Very visual and compelling. You had me engaged from beginning to end. Great descriptions.
Thrilling story. Great job, I really enjoyed this one!
The borg would definitely disagree with this-lol! What a great read. I like the pace of this and especially the end with Paul's last words. So much heart! I also like the acronyms you used, "Salt" etc. Very creative! ^_^
You made the ultimate persecution of Christians very real in your suspenseful science fiction story. Good job.
You have an awesome writing gift! Creative...I enjoyed the read!
Amazing. This was great writing.
This is a good look at a dark world. Good writing that held my attention. Thumbs up.
First - loved the title :) A very well told image of how it could be. Nicely done :)