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What a neat look at Jesus' ministry! I really enjoyed this. Good job!
A good modern day article on an historical event! Isn't great how many investigating journalists have accepted Christ after they have completed their investigation? Fine job.
I enjoyed the modern news slant on this Biblical event. Good work.
This made me smile! Very well-written. Loved the voice. This definetly is one of my favs and it deserves to place!
What a wonderful approach giving us a fresh look at Jesus' preaching and ministry. I loved it! :-)
I enjoyed the fresh approach to this story. Mastercrafted from start to finish!
Very creative approach to the topic. As a former newspaper reporter, I caught a couple places that sounded a bit less "newsy" than I'd prefer, but this is very strong.
Really like the reporterly style of writing here. Nice job on this piece of writing.
Oh, I really like this! It's fresh and entertaining, and well written, too. Thumbs up.
I loved this style! Also loved the small bits added to make it so interesting, such as the crutches being gathered up and sold. LOL! This a wonderful piece! You've taken a story that many might know so well they might not want to hear it again and brought it to life. Great work!
That last line was best of all! As one that worked in media relations, I just love press releases and news articles. This was a creative gem!
I like your approach. This is a great story. Great job.
Very imaginative way of presenting your story! It sounded so authentically "newsy"!! :) Great job!
very nicely done! I could easily imagine this in "USA today". Thanks for sharing this
This is nice! A very different feel and outlook here. Kudos for creativity! ^_^
Nicely done!
I liked your creative approach here. The "publicity committee" was a nice touch to an excellent retelling.