The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
What a neat look at Jesus' ministry! I really enjoyed this. Good job!
A good modern day article on an historical event! Isn't great how many investigating journalists have accepted Christ after they have completed their investigation? Fine job.
05/11/07
I enjoyed the modern news slant on this Biblical event. Good work.
05/12/07
This made me smile! Very well-written. Loved the voice. This definetly is one of my favs and it deserves to place!
05/14/07
What a wonderful approach giving us a fresh look at Jesus' preaching and ministry. I loved it! :-)
05/15/07
I enjoyed the fresh approach to this story. Mastercrafted from start to finish!
05/15/07
Very creative approach to the topic. As a former newspaper reporter, I caught a couple places that sounded a bit less "newsy" than I'd prefer, but this is very strong.
05/15/07
Really like the reporterly style of writing here. Nice job on this piece of writing.
Oh, I really like this! It's fresh and entertaining, and well written, too. Thumbs up.
05/15/07
I loved this style! Also loved the small bits added to make it so interesting, such as the crutches being gathered up and sold. LOL! This a wonderful piece! You've taken a story that many might know so well they might not want to hear it again and brought it to life. Great work!
05/15/07
That last line was best of all! As one that worked in media relations, I just love press releases and news articles. This was a creative gem!
I like your approach. This is a great story. Great job.
05/16/07
Very imaginative way of presenting your story! It sounded so authentically "newsy"!! :) Great job!
05/16/07
very nicely done! I could easily imagine this in "USA today". Thanks for sharing this
This is nice! A very different feel and outlook here. Kudos for creativity! ^_^
05/16/07
Nicely done!
I liked your creative approach here. The "publicity committee" was a nice touch to an excellent retelling.