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Wow - This was really gripping. It caught my attention the whole way through. I'd love to know what happened next. (hint, hint!)
04/28/07
Thought provoking story and very tender.
04/28/07
You got my attention! I hope Mr. Hanes keeps coming back, no matter what the doc says. A gripping romance. :)
04/29/07
What a great take on the topic. Very emotional, you did a great job with the characters here. Great work!
Oh my! What do I say about this. So bittersweet. I can see that Sarah is a winner either way. At least she was able to feel and hear the love that was expressed to her. I sure would like to know the end of this. You've hooked me.
12/30/10
I like this story. It is so rare for someone to love a person who is completely bedridden and who has no hope of recovery.