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Wow - This was really gripping. It caught my attention the whole way through. I'd love to know what happened next. (hint, hint!)
Thought provoking story and very tender.
You got my attention! I hope Mr. Hanes keeps coming back, no matter what the doc says. A gripping romance. :)
What a great take on the topic. Very emotional, you did a great job with the characters here. Great work!
Oh my! What do I say about this. So bittersweet. I can see that Sarah is a winner either way. At least she was able to feel and hear the love that was expressed to her. I sure would like to know the end of this. You've hooked me.
I like this story. It is so rare for someone to love a person who is completely bedridden and who has no hope of recovery.