The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
This is the epitome of romance. Just a few places that might be smoothed out, but no errors that I could see. This is such a sweet sappy, story with a warm and happy ending. :)
I love this story. You did a great job telling it. Too bad there was a word limit, because I would've loved to read more.
04/29/07
You took all the elements of a great selling inspirational romance novel and packed it in a challenge. Whatever my problems are I forgot them, you swept me off to the ranch. Loved it!
04/30/07
I can just see the jacket of this romance novel-to-be! Your story is very true to the genre, and was fun to read.
I think their blossoming love can hardly be contained in this synopsis. In my opinion, you have a handle on a great full-blown romance story. I especially like the ranch setting!
Good story. Like all the rest of the challenges this week, I want to know more. Oh well, maybe we'll have a romance contest with a longer word count. Good job.