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Excellent. A very realistic romance!
Sweet! I thought the beginning was a little slow. If not for the word count, you could have told us what the women were saying instead of just telling that he overheard them. When you hit on the romantic stuff, it was like you hit your element and you drew me in, got better and better, and finished great. I love the last line. And true love in action doth a tiger make, too. :)
I loved this. Tender, sweet, romantic and great dialogue. Excellent ending!
Excellent job on the dialogue - and I love your title. Great ending!
This brought back some memories. ;0) Great last line. Thanks for the fun read.
Cute loving relationship. It's true that most men are romantic and caring--if someone gives them a hint! Good writing.