The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
I really really enjoyed this! A true mystery with great characters and a wonderful message.
04/12/07
Great job! I like your characters and the mystery, and LOVED the answer to the mysterious captivity in the end.
What a wonderful "Hardy Boys" story geared to a Christian audience. I liked how the boy wrote "Day 100. Free at last." Such a good message here.
04/16/07
What a brilliant creative mind to think up something this unique and off the wall! Very nicely done! I was right in there with them all the way! Very creative and right on target - topic=wise. Enjoyed the sleuthing.
04/17/07
Wow - this had it all - good characters - made me choke up at the ending and a mystery too! Nice writing - very good job!
04/19/07
Congrats on getting third place. This was a good story. I really liked the Sleuths' nicknames. :)
Congratulations Sharlyn! I really enjoyed this mystery, and my favorite line was the ending. I also appreciated the way you portrayed the character Speedbump who ended up praying with his father about the situation instead of being pressured into immediate action by his friends.