The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/07
This is a very well written pieace with a very true to life situation that is often faced by those who underestimate the seriousness of an impending storm. Good job. keep writing.
This is good writing. I do wish it had ended on a happier note. Maybe sighting their destination in the wake of the storm. But it was very real.
03/12/07
I've never been in a tornado but know they're scary! I would have liked to know how the girls fared in the storm!