The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What a story! And to think you found a scripture to clarify the dream perfectly! I had to smile at this ironic coincidence. Great job - exciting and creative! Whew! Loved it! (Wish I were in a different level...too many goodies in this one...**smile**)
Hehe This is so funny. The only thing I would have changed would be to get rid of the line about hoping it was a nightmare. I think that may give too much away too early. Overall, great job. And I LOVE how you tied it in to a Bible verse at the end. And a very appropriate one at that! lol
Clever and original! I enjoyed the story.
I echo all above! Clever and entertaining.
This is clever--I'm not usually a fan of "it was only a dream," but mostly because so often they are heavy-handed or cop-outs. Not this one! Just the right touch--light, fun, with just a touch of satire. Very, very good.
"Oh My!" indeed! creative and well written. Really enjoyed reading this.
Very cute! Well written, and even the perfect scripture. Good job. :)
So creative - and I LOVE your "take" on the verse! Felt so realistic. Great stuff!