The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Oh, this was good. I especially liked the repeated line. It added something. Great job, and keep writing.
03/04/07
Where do I start with how amazing this is? The secret place dad went to? Mom's scent wafting? The descriptions of mom's items so real I felt like I was holding them? The "proud" repitition throughout. This was simply amazing. Don't stop writing!
03/04/07
I thought by the title that this story might be about a quilt, but you've told more than a story. I thought about writing on a similar theme, and now I'm so glad I didn't! You've done an outstanding job - your wonderful writing stirred my heart. Thank you.
03/05/07
Lovely story. Captivating. Well done.
Wonderful nostalgic story. Also enjoyed the fact that time moves on an she was now ready to move on with it.
03/06/07
Great job! I loved how you stitched all the pieces of this story together so well - good ending. Some very nice thoughts throughout!!
03/08/07
Congratulations on third place! This is a really good story. I liked the image of the sister raising her younger siblings, strengthened by her mother's memory.