The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this was good. I especially liked the repeated line. It added something. Great job, and keep writing.
Where do I start with how amazing this is? The secret place dad went to? Mom's scent wafting? The descriptions of mom's items so real I felt like I was holding them? The "proud" repitition throughout. This was simply amazing. Don't stop writing!
I thought by the title that this story might be about a quilt, but you've told more than a story. I thought about writing on a similar theme, and now I'm so glad I didn't! You've done an outstanding job - your wonderful writing stirred my heart. Thank you.
Lovely story. Captivating. Well done.
Wonderful nostalgic story. Also enjoyed the fact that time moves on an she was now ready to move on with it.
Great job! I loved how you stitched all the pieces of this story together so well - good ending. Some very nice thoughts throughout!!
Congratulations on third place! This is a really good story. I liked the image of the sister raising her younger siblings, strengthened by her mother's memory.