The Official Writing Challenge
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This story really pulled me in. Perhaps a little more description of her cell and the fabric of the balloon, but I like it the way it is.
This is well written, but I wonder what kind of material she used - was it bits from all the dresses? I was hooked in and read it all the way through. Well done, with a really neat ending. :)
Clever story. I was taken in immediately. I couldn't see her making a balloon from cloth, but then I realized it was like a parachute, which ,way back when, might have been called a balloon. All in all, I really enjoyed the article. Maybe a short story that tells more of the beginning and expounds the bulk of this story could be written when the challenge is over. I liked the ending just like it was.