The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/07
What a delightful story! I enjoyed the first part the most--the hilarious dialogue among all the little "dollies" at the dinner table. I could just see and hear them all!

Would have liked to hear more dialogue among them throughout, or at least at some point later on in the story. It was the living characters in this--especially the small ones with their lively interactions--that really captured my interest and got me laughing!
Good family story. Sewing was a plus, love was the main point here. Good job.
03/05/07
This is absolutely an adorable story written from a mothers heart. I can just see the seven dollies all line up and beaming ear to ear in their new outfits. I can also see their Mommy beaming with pride in who they are and who God has made them to be. Great story.
03/06/07
A charming and delightful story, I could picture each of the children. The dialogue realistic. Thanks for a great read!
03/08/07
Wonderful story, and so well written! Great job.