The Official Writing Challenge
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A fascinating read indeed. The focus or what the author wants us to catch however is not very clear, at least to me. Perhaps a litle more on that would make the story complete.
I really think this is very creative and has so much potential with just a little fine tuning! I really enjoyed your story.
Very cleverly told and entertaining. I agree with Anthony's comments, but perhaps the story was ment just for entertainment?
I was laughing the whole way through. Classic! :-)
OK this gave me a nice little chuckle :) Afterall, super heroes don't age do they? Imagine being replaced by Dora?? Very clever!