The Official Writing Challenge
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Brilliant! This was very clever, and I especially loved the ending.
Oh, I liked this. Nice touch with the end, I liked the bit with not coming in last, and timekeepers. ^_^
Terrific illustration of the Scriture you cited. A fun read, too!
What makes me think that many will identify with the "non training" part? Experience? Oh well, good job.
Witty, clever, and funny - and loved the fact that Paul won with all his miles of practice running. Great job of keeping your audience of readers glued to your work to find out how you came out in the end. Personally, I enjoyed the, ah, the run! Enjoyable.