The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
Wonderful! You have such a talent for description! I could see the sparkle, feel the chill. You painted a divine picture of a little sprite, flitting among the roses. You could work for Hallmark I think!
02/17/07
Beautiful story; however, alien to me, so I must look up the scripture, look up Sprites...and find the meaning of this story. Nicely done - and very well written.
02/18/07
A very visual piece, and I could just feel the shivery-ness of it.
02/18/07
A heartwarming story!